Comments of chapter undefined of The Hungry Hunter
The Hungry Hunter
CarltonThe
Chapter comments4
there is something with this chapter. although it's understandable, i can't connect with him. the cause of his personality was vague, as if wanting us to understand him. i think it would be better to describe it well since character development is important to connect.
Hello, thanks for reading. I tried to write it without giving out the deep inner thoughts of Allen as he is not much of a thinker. Most of his thoughts are given out through dialouge with himself or to other characters. I also wanted his other thoughts to be portrayed through what he does. Which I leave to be interpreted to the reader. Allen is honest and straight forward. There is no real cause to his personality other than him being raised as a slave and being curious of the world around him. Death being one of those many curiosities. If you're still not connecting or if I didn't describe Allen well, please ask any questions. Have a great day!
