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CarltonThe

CarltonThe

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Just trying to make his way in the universe.

2020-02-02 JoinedUnited States
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  • CarltonThe
    CarltonThe2yr
    Commented

    Before anyone makes the joke. This is most definitely what I had in mind. And sorry to disappoint, but Ferb never makes an appearance.

    Ch 1 When His Eyes Melted
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    Phineas of the Melted Eyes
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  • CarltonThe
    CarltonThe2yr
    Replied to TrueTych

    I did write him. I just don't want to spoil anything, unless it's like a Q and A type thing. I want to see theories!

    "Hola," the doctor said in an authentic German accent, "I am the doctor in question. You must be Riley Simmons correct?"
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    Majestic Rebirth
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  • CarltonThe
    CarltonThe2yr
    Replied to TrueTych

    I couldn't stop laughing after writing this, so I'm glad someone said something about it. I wonder if the doctor is trilingual?

    "Hola," the doctor said in an authentic German accent, "I am the doctor in question. You must be Riley Simmons correct?"
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  • CarltonThe
    CarltonThe2yr
    Replied to Mr_Lonely_001

    Is it? Sorry It's been a stressful last couple days for me. I was rereading it. It should be 3-1. If you are regarding the catch that Cindy made when she sent it back, that wouldn't count as a catch. It's only if she completely stopped it and grabbed it. I apologize for the lack of clarity on that. You only gain 1 point for catches and 2 points for goals. Once I'm done with the volume, I will be releasing extra chapters going into the finer details of world. If my calculations are still wrong, please correct me, I'll update it accordingly.

    "The score is 3-1. Did I mention that you get 2 points for getting the ball through the goal."
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    The Hungry Hunter
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  • CarltonThe
    CarltonThe2yr
    Replied to Irysss_Novalin

    Only the saving people part, I thought it was kind of funny because it reminded me of Lily. (If you haven't read the novel yet, she's a character who wants to save as many people as she can.) The reaching the eyes and ears of the people part is reference to Lily's mother and how her words couldn't reach the ears of the people. I hope you have a good day and so on as well.

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  • CarltonThe
    CarltonThe2yr
    Replied to Naaaaaaaaaaaah

    The baby was a slave themselves. Essentially, they were bought by the master. The King and the master has an agreememt to allow the master to do whatever he wants with his slaves and farm, in exchange the King would get something which I cannot say because it is a spoiler. The master wanted to test the MC, Allen, to see exactly how well he can handle such a task. As important as I say the baby is, spoiler alert, she's not that important.

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    The Hungry Hunter
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  • CarltonThe
    CarltonThe2yr
    Replied to Mini_Fen

    Please seek help.

    Ch 1 Hunter Report #1: Allen's Application
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    The Hungry Hunter
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  • CarltonThe
    CarltonThe2yr
    Replied to Wallker

    Thank you for reading and leaving a review. Hopefully your message can reach the eyes and ears of the people, and save many. Enjoy the rest of your day and so on!

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    The Hungry Hunter
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  • CarltonThe
    CarltonThe2yr
    Posted

    I enjoy reading this and Mi Young's astonishing abilities to be unsurpassed. At some times, it catches me off guard and I'm not sure if I'm inspired by it or simply just admiring it. The stability of updates makes me wonder if the author is surpassing their own limits to keep writing. If so, keep going, if not KEEP GOING. I cannot wait to see how the story develops from here. The characters are quite human, and the world seems to be getting fleshed out in detail. I'm excited.

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  • CarltonThe
    CarltonThe2yr
    Replied to yohananmikhael

    Hello, thanks for reading. I tried to write it without giving out the deep inner thoughts of Allen as he is not much of a thinker. Most of his thoughts are given out through dialouge with himself or to other characters. I also wanted his other thoughts to be portrayed through what he does. Which I leave to be interpreted to the reader. Allen is honest and straight forward. There is no real cause to his personality other than him being raised as a slave and being curious of the world around him. Death being one of those many curiosities. If you're still not connecting or if I didn't describe Allen well, please ask any questions. Have a great day!

    Ch 1 Hunter Report #1: Allen's Application
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  • CarltonThe
    CarltonThe2yr
    Commented

    Interesting so far. Some details could be better said through dialouge, or even have some of the questions on the exam reveal the world to us.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Entrance Exam Part 1
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