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Sugarrushdragon_69
Sugarrushdragon_69Lv4Sugarrushdragon_69

Love the chapter, I was at the edge of my seat waiting for what Kevin would do (* ˃ ᵕ ˂ ) I don't know why but I get a laugh just imagining Kevin desperately stuffing grass into his mouth, like just fistfulls of grass straight down his throat. Also Ren is Cockroach Boi confirmed, even when He's meant to die he just survives somehow ┐|❛□❛✿|┌

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GeckoRich
GeckoRichLv14GeckoRich

Clearly fake, he definitely failed and Ren is perma dead.

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Tio_Iroh99
Tio_Iroh99Lv12Tio_Iroh99

I liked the chapter, but author, I recommend that you don't use the Ren or Kevin death option so much because now we know that both Kevin and Ren can be saved thanks to the book and that will take away the emotion if you repeat it a lot

Drew_Sansone
Drew_SansoneLv15Drew_Sansone

Can Ren not die. For once?

D_Neuanfang
D_NeuanfangLv11D_Neuanfang

First time to witness Kevin's system in action. I can almost feel his frustration 😅 Good chap! 👍 Thanks dear author!

JExtra
JExtraLv11JExtra

Red Book = Get out of jail card (prices may vary). Let's hope both Ren and Kevin won't have rely on it again in order to save each other.

Bluepikachu23
Bluepikachu23Lv15Bluepikachu23

be funny if it was like rens dead end of the book bye guys

aricre
aricreLv14aricre

is he synchronizing with his past self? maybe regaining his last memories amd strenght, if so that would be a massive boost for him, I wonder what Ren will do to catch up...

Commusyou
CommusyouLv12Commusyou

Good boy, Kevin.

Cookie4Life_
Cookie4Life_Lv4Cookie4Life_

waiting for when Ren realises Kevin helped him :)

smylie
smylieLv15smylie

Wait..... I'm thinking the system and the book are totally in cahoots here!!!!

Mr_3twy
Mr_3twyLv2Mr_3twy

I hope when ren comes back Kevin tells him about the book

OzzWorld
OzzWorldLv15OzzWorld

Ten dying or being in a situation of death is getting annoying still like just let him hold his own

Ace_Crown
Ace_CrownLv3Ace_Crown

well ,till the last moment of the last chapter i was like, "No Ren is not gonna die,its not happening" It was actually a shock that he actually died

Ryguy1020
Ryguy1020Lv13Ryguy1020

This is exactly what I hoped would happen. This story just keeps getting better

Aizsa
AizsaLv15Aizsa

thanks for the chapter

Blas_de_lezo
Blas_de_lezoLv12Blas_de_lezo

This was a great plot idea. Cant be used More than once or twice before it feels too Deus ex machina but for now just great stuff.

NexIzich
NexIzichLv15NexIzich

So I guess Ren did lose the book, I can't see him not trying to use a useful ability for a dangerous mission such as this one

skuders
skudersLv15skuders

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Imagination99
Imagination99Lv3Imagination99