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it is interesting how the story plot goes when there's a problem our mc leave it for later like the ava recruitment and amanda problem he leaves it for later and focus in the present

Estouline
EstoulineLv12Estouline

Yeah I personally like it because he is not like your typical main character always running straight foward danger.

Zamir
ZamirLv15Zamir

Matthew got the character development I wanted for ren 🤦🏾‍♂️

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NBV
NBVLv15NBV

Ah, a growing antagonist. Something I wonder if it still exists in some stories here. Maybe they do, but they usually just end up stepping stones. But this one, I just hope it doesn't end up like that. I'm liking it so far. With Everblood, makes me wonder if he will end up like those secret bosses after the main boss in games and some stories. I mean in Kevin's PoV the demon king is the main boss. What if after beating the demon king in the supposed story that was almosy finished. There was another boss controlling the scenes behind and it was Everblood! Anyways, thanks for the chapter.

HimanshuPratap
HimanshuPratapLv12HimanshuPratap

I don’t want any superpowers, systems or get isekaied, just one simple wish; to have the sheer will to stop reading it for a month so that i can mass read it in one go. It would be soooo satisfying.

Graeme_Georges
Graeme_GeorgesLv14Graeme_Georges

something needs to happen to Ren for him to grow. He's falling behind jin and Matthew. He needs something that forces him to grow.

Ein_Mezus
Ein_MezusLv11Ein_Mezus

Well good for you Matthew i guess... just don't easily lose and just be another stepping stone please oh right how about you also get another last 5 sword art that equal with Levisha style and Keiki style The one which have strongest attack from what Ren talking but have side effect damage the body of user i mean he got contract with demon so at least have a strong body that can regenerate is a must maybe Just fighto Matthew!!! don't become a joke chara and at least survive until last arc of story please

System_Creator
System_CreatorLv13System_Creator

Thanks for the chapter! Character growth is always appreciated, especially when it doesn't just focus on Kevin and Ren's group.

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JustThatBoredGuy
JustThatBoredGuyLv4JustThatBoredGuy

Merry Christmas and a happy new year to all who read this on time[img=recommend][img=recommend]

onsguren
onsgurenLv11onsguren

Arid_Landscape
Arid_LandscapeLv3Arid_Landscape

*This comment was made with no intention to trigger, however, when you create something similar to some other novel(one that's been my favorite novel since the last year), there's bound to be comparisons being made... So, instead of the legendary Bell, we have the pedophile Everblood, and instead of THE 'Jin Sahyuk', we have Mathew🙄...

Dewi_1412
Dewi_1412Lv13Dewi_1412

I wish I had a time machine to go to the future in which the novel is already completed so I can read it in one go. Reality is so sad!

isekai_hero2001
isekai_hero2001Lv12isekai_hero2001

someone is getting character development

100EyedArgus
100EyedArgusLv11100EyedArgus

Thanks for the chapter! I feel sad for Kevin, I hope he get close to Ren's parents too. Like how Matthew was before he betrayed them. I am excited for Ren surprising them with his quick slash (mixed with Keiki) :')))))) and Jin! Me wants Jin!

Sunny_Sphynx
Sunny_SphynxLv14Sunny_Sphynx

Right, so the monolith is fine with their...'subordinates?' killing each other?

alanuniq
alanuniqLv15alanuniq

Yeah polish more

NotNecro
NotNecroLv3NotNecro

Mathew is quite likely to get the 3rd sword art which ren talks about in the beginning. [img=faceslap]

No_Reading_No_Life
No_Reading_No_LifeLv15No_Reading_No_Life

ミ /彡    ..ミ、|ミ //彡 Thanks!! ミ.|.ミ/ ./.|  Nepu!! .|//|.  []. ∧_∧ /.  []    (´・ω・`) ┬┬┬┬┬-0┬0‐┬┬ ‐┼┼┼┼┼‐┼┼┼┼┼ ┼┼┼┼┼┼‐┼┼┼┼┼ {Copied from GM_Rusaku}

5paghetti_5auce
5paghetti_5auceLv145paghetti_5auce

thanks for the chapter

Orexi
OrexiLv1Orexi

thanks.

Anon0331
Anon0331Lv3Anon0331

Thanks for the chapters

Hosphar
HospharLv4Hosphar

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