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Graeme_Georges

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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2mth
    Commented

    Maybe she had him in secret but couldn’t keep him in the tower??

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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2mth
    Replied to Jeri_

    Why’s the romance tag there then lmao

    Rebirth Of The Serpent Master
    Fantasy · Jeri_
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges1yr
    Replied to Oblivion_1094

    Lucifer’s not a unique character that has to fit any defined gender like James Bond who has a history of being a male. For it to be a gender bende they need to have a predetermined gender.

    '-Ah, yes. I'm Lucifer!'
    Blessed by Lucifer
    Fantasy · Antenz
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    I had a feeling he was going to go back to the lock for some reason or another

    Ch 474 Going back [2]
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    oooooo maybe a confession or something in the next couple of chapter. I can't wait

    Ch 469 Concert [3]
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    Why would you raise that flag

    "Yeah, I'm tired of all the constant problems that keep popping out of nowhere. I just want to relax for once. Have a breather."
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Replied to Zulu2018

    it's good but the romance and ending pisser of a lot of people. Including me.

    Honestly, I know this might be a dumb move on my part, but, I felt that this was the only way to resolve everything perfectly. 
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    ah, peace. does Ren finally get a break or does the trouble keep on coming

    Ch 439 About my mother... [5]
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    Ahhhhhhhhhh

    '...Do I perhaps like Amanda?'
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    I wonder who cursed Amanda's mother

    "...If you don't want to die, you need to stop her from curing her mother." 
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    Nooooo another cliff

    Ch 437 About my mother... [3]
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    let's go Ren

    Ch 432 Your choice [3]
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    ooooo that's so cute. Maybe we'll see some more development in their relationship

    Ch 427 Round of thirty two [2]
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    I'm curious if Ren knows this as well or its something "he" never "wrote" in the novel.

    Ch 426 Round of thirty two [1]
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    Will there be another chapter today?

    Ch 403 Doubt [2]
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    are we getting another chapter?

    Ch 401 Pure Evil [3]
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Replied to Sleepy_Slime

    Finally someone understands tysm

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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Replied to Graeme_Georges

    sorry I wrote a lot, I tend to do this when something excites me

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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Posted

    I am gonna be 100% honest here. it is such a breath of fresh hair to read a novel on here that doesn't sound like it's been written by a 8-year old. I dont mean to bash other authors but sometimes the improper sentence structure and grammar make it a chore to read and very often I drop the novel because of it. I didn't give 5 stars because it's too early for me to judge how the world and characters will be developed. Arvell's character has been fleshed out really well so I have high hopes for the future. In terms of suggestion I'd say dont fall into the trap of cliches and generic tropes that make a novel cringe to read. Also, when possible include insight into the world around him and I can see that you've started to do this with the thales river. I enjoy these tid bits of information that construct a vast and expansive world that isnt limited to what Arvell is a part of. I think that this novel may benefit from a third person omniscient perspective to help develop characters that aren't the main character. I just hope to see more in depth insight into characters' emotions and opinions that influence their decisions and actions and also make sense. For example, his mother seems to be more than what she appears to be and I think that it's a really great story element that differentiates this Novel from others where he never had any support in the castle and its this sob story that's been overused so many times. The pacing as well is very good, it feels like there is never anytime for Arvell to ever rest and the tone and mood of the novel conveys the rush and desperation that Arvell feels. Overall this is a very promising novel and I cant wait to see more chapters.

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  • Graeme_Georges
    Graeme_Georges2yr
    Commented

    wait, is he back in his old body or is it like he was sucked back into when he was at the monolith?

    Ch 398 Dream or reality? [3]
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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