Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV
The Author's POV
Entrail_JI
Chapter comments47
It was a good try using names to make clear that the Hollberg arc was a tragedy but I couldn't feel any sad atmosphere in this chapter. Especially since the arc ended the last chapter could be because of the time skip but from a reader's perspective, I feel it's been a bit skipped. Furthermore, you should probably integrate the parents into the main plot and make a "promise", because the incoming arc kinda feels like a filler now and even though u probably will link it later, it currently doesn't look very interesting, Last arc was pretty good tho.
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Entrail_JI
i can't help but loving this subtle development "casual acquaintances"!! its a Large step for the MC when he just wanted to be a stranger to all the main cast! and i hope it keeps growing the relation! and i would like more dungeons for him to get a little more strong, or maybe financially helping more his family's Guild with that money, but What is happening with That Guild???? i hope it can be fixed, and thanks for the chapter!!!
