Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

Stay low.

Sigh. This novel already has 100+ chapters so it's not worth writing this but I just feel like it. I don't like the way the moment a character is introduced you explain every single detail about his backstory. It just makes it a bit bland. I'd lack to discover more about characters throughout the story, not the moment they were introduced. Well I'm still enjoying it so great work.

So far the story looks good. I have high expectations for it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

First i know you want to make hge story have a loot of detail but sometime its unnecesesary for the detail (English is not my main langgue)

i hate chain villain in all novel, 90% of them is just filler as they lack depth

I don't think he made an effort to stay low at all. Rather than hiding his strength, it really seemed like putting a needless target on his back instead. Cant he just practice smth else in class?

author would you stop describing how handsome or how beautiful every character is at every chance u get it's hella annoying.

if he wanted to avoid attention, he should have stayed in the centre while practicing practicing his quick draw thing. it's easy to get noticed when something seem so elegant and the same when something seem so stupid. what he just did only made more people wonder what he is doing hence becoming popular (not for something good ofcourse)

I like some of the characterizations introduced here. I recognize some, but they are less obvious and placed in interesting backgrounds. Definitely the writing is starting to improve.

The demons creating a scheme to control Gillbert, it's so childish. It was the most ridiculous twist I've ever read.

Yo a tip for you is to not bombard us with so much sentences describing a characters beauty. It gets tiring after reading how perfect her face is or how tempting her lips are for every character

clearly he failed to be a 'mob only' as he deliberately practice his sword art with so many people seeing him.. and also why he became a loner for no reason? is better if he stay as mob should 'act' ?? i know he dont want to do anything with the protagonsit and the rest but him staying out of the way and also not interacting with the other mobs is frustrating to read... still great work tho

can the mc have more than one art like is he going to get one with magic?

yup sounds like the author couldn't find a better excuse for the antagonist to be anti

stay calm boy

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prepare for trouble dear mob 😂

I know some if not most are complaining about the large info dump but considering that, the book itself is based off someone who created the world he is in rn, it makes a lot more sense + the point of view is different and I don't think it should affect the progress of the story much .Then again, I'm just a new reader (tho not new to the Isekai genre) and I'd still like to say that this style of writing is rather interesting, I like it so far.

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