Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

I really like this so far. I hope we also get some charecter development as I don't really like MCs with anger issues which causes them to be rash and idiotic.

alright mr. author, no offence but what makes your novel different from "The Novel's Extra". Just asking as that was one of my fav novels and it would be sad if this is just a ripoff of that book

A orphan who isn’t curious if he now has a family first thing when he wake’s up ? 😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣 I’k

Should’ve named him Ben Dover

one man general or one man army?

I'm curious as to what possible information would have given any hint that he was in his novel? from the reader's perspective he just magically realized he was in it. Nothing up to this point gave any indication of where he transmigrated to.

too many info dump, my brain is overloading.

i enjoy it so far but the huge info dump about the orc leader made it hard to read like imo its just pointless since at this point of the story the mc probobly wont go to the orc's country so that info is pretty useless unless it comes up in the next 10 chapters

😍😍😍

A really good novel so far

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Thanks

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gracias por el cap

tftc

love it so far, looking forward to read the next chapter but my dear author I think you really need an editor to help you checked the miss spelling

I liked the chapter but how old is the mc

git