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Comments of chapter undefined of [Canceled] Reincarnated in the World of the Last Game I Played

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Queen_Karina
Queen_KarinaLv13Queen_Karina

This whole chapter was so hard to get through… First: it seemed she had no sense of urgency when she was happily training with that guy while her daughter was still kidnapped. Second: Where did her anger from her daughter being kidnapped go???? It’ like she didn’t take it seriously Third: why was she at one point so weak she had to be manhandled by a mob but then right after she could one shot him with magic.(why not do that from the start) Forth: why did she let the main perpetrator go and then completely forgot about him after he left. I really hope the rest of this novel isn’t as forced as these last few chapters 🙏🙏🙏🙏

All_J
All_JAuthorAll_J

I agree with every word. This is a draft of a story that we didn't plan on writing. That said, we'll finish it and then polish it into a definitive version. I hope you give this story another chance. ^^

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Sorrest_
Sorrest_Lv14Sorrest_

This all just felt so forced. The whole scenario. I tried to enjoy it but I just couldn’t. Athena is so obnoxiously useless dude.

Daoist_MUIH
Daoist_MUIHLv2Daoist_MUIH

tx