Yep, today I know that. That said, thanks.

I agree with every word. This is a draft of a story that we didn't plan on writing. That said, we'll finish it and then polish it into a definitive version. I hope you give this story another chance. ^^

Items and money are from the previous character she deleted.

Well, I don't mean to offend and I hope you don't, but don't you think your view of love is a bit limited? Love is not something that can be put in quantities. It's simpler and more complicated than anything you may have ever experienced. Now, if we are talking about passion, which is nothing more than sexual desire, we can put it in "numbers". In this case I can say that Athena desires Mifa and Anemus in the same intensity.

I understand your point and partially agree. As for the development of Athena and Mifa's relationship, this is one of the sins I committed in this version, but it will be fixed in the final version. Now, about bigamy. In my personal life, if I'm in the know, I'd have no problem sharing a girl's love. After all, what matters most in a relationship, besides love, is honesty. In my view, a relationship doesn't have to be so black and white. If people like each other, what's the problem with them being together? Love is something irrational from the beginning. Therefore, I would have no problem being part of what here in Brazil we call "trisal", being me who divides or who is divided. Anyway, in the definitive version I'm going to make the relationship between them something deeper in addition to fixing several other problems that the story has.

Anemus, the nymph who appears early in the story, and Mifa, a beastman girl who appears a little later in the story.

It's not a harem, but it's not monogamous. There are two romantic interests and that's all I can say without giving spoilers.

Yep

Thank you for continuing to read my novel this far! :)

Thank you for reading. ;)

I agree, but I'm getting better at this. Well, at least I think I'm getting better... :×

I didn't delete your correction comments, they disappeared because I had to repost the chapter that wasn't updating the corrections I made.

Yes, I translated while making corrections. Thanks again. About the new stories, there are some, short and long, that we are writing and will post later. With these, I want to do it differently than I did with Last Played, and have a closed ending in mind before posting.

Thanks for reading and correcting so many of my errors.

When Athena first met Uran.

It happens less often today, but these bugs still happen in the app.

It was before, "two years ago".

Up until this point, that was the plan, but things ended up going in a completely different direction.

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