Comments of chapter undefined of Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

Mc is pathetically weak if he was to afraid to confront pre hero superman decides to go to earth to what? Stagnate because he cant grow stronger without constant interference from heros. This was poorly thought out and idiotic.

Wukong?

so another minus point for me. I hate the fact he will create a 'super' identy to cliche for me

if he goes ashore just to hide and wreck his personal development, he should have continued his space adventures, at least he would have more contact with advanced technologies and more extreme weather scenarios

idk why but i really didn't like this chapter .... every other was really good but this on was just all over the place ...

Why does he want to revive his parents? Theyre not even his parents, theyre just the parents of his body which he took over, and technically he killed their son.

Dropped

Was that Felicia a marvel reference?

InNer monologue ,tireD of reAding thos bs

intergalactic warrior😤

hero name: Saiyajin Villain name: Namek

This is so stupid and contrived I can hear my neurones killing themselves just skimming through the lines…

Felicia Hardy?...

I don't know if you already chose, but it would be nice to reference Sayajin, like “Ikari” or “Oozaru”, maybe something related to his power, like “Kizaru” or “Kong”.

Shang Chi

Thanks for the chapter

felicia is from marvel, right?

dude, i wanna ask you. How can you make up to 30 novel chapters? Usually for novice writers, at 10 or more chapters they are already bored..... how do you deal with that boredom? and I myself am a novice writer on wattpad experiencing this....

Can't doctor fate send him to the db universe ?

Yamoshi