is nice so far but the chapters are extremely short

Mate the chapters needs to by longer by a lot ... longer.

nice we need more chapters ... [img=update]

i almost lost all hope .... you are out last hope Obione :D glad to have you back Autor-san

Yea we wanna more chapters mate :P

why all of the sadden i can smell chains smell form this ff?

chaps are just to short to even try

will you leave as with no chapter for the end of the year ? that cruel Author-San

well i did the same but just give chap 30 as a example xd

i will by honest Author Sama what you are doing is better then most normal books on Amazon some even have Audio-books .... The chapters are long and interesting But what is extremely frustrating is that they are not long enough and the wait is killing me . Like really haw many times can you read the same chapter xd cuss i did read chap 30 more then 10 times out of boredom :d

Thanks for the chapter!

will there by a new chapter today ?

thx for the chapter next pliz :D

AWESOME chapter and we want more :D

i cant wait for the next few chapters to read abaut the faces of his parants when that fish evolves in to Melodic i hope is gona by samting xd

That a pity what you have there is one of if not the best Pokemon ff atm So if you found a bit of time don't forget about as :d

Very good so far more chapters pliz

One of the best Pokémon stories on this websites comparable to Pokémon Wanderlust A new world A world that is more realistic than that of the anime that you win cuz of fiendish I just hope Author San will continiue :)

can we get more chapters? pliz?

do i smell eternals ?