Comments of chapter undefined of Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

CrimsonWolfAuthor

Chapter comments42

Blas_de_lezoLv12Blas_de_lezo

honestly the transition from the 1st chapter to the god of darkness feels a bit too abrupt, not enough is told and its not well done, the mc feels bland, without enough being told about him to make a personality, lets hope the novel improves significantly. No hate, just hoping for constructive criticism.

1yr

Gamer_Boy_2840Lv4Gamer_Boy_2840

So he's been a wimp for all his life, never standing up for himself but when he meets an actual god that could possibly torture him for all eternity for all he knows he tells the god to F Off? really? I find it extremely hard to believe that...

2yr

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Daoist_RubenoLv11Daoist_Rubeno

Infantile way the first chapters are written makes me wonder makes it hard for me to whether continue reading novel or not. It feels childish.

2yr

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melkord_5421Lv1melkord_5421

🤯😱

2yr

paculLv12pacul

its like speed maniac hypercar owner picking a rusty car with broken engine hoping it would break sound barrier just because it is completely different compared to his fast, but not supersonic fast hypercar

2yr

Daoistq4qrvdLv1Daoistq4qrvd

I love the attitude of the MC, it's amazing!!! this is my first novel since it had never caught my attention but it's just read the synopsis I loved it!!!! 💕😻👍

2yr