Khaall
Good job with this chapter! The pacing feels fine to me, if a little slow. I think it’s nice to see how other trainers interact with the world and such, but Robin feels like a bit much. I feel like she’s supposed to be a mini-antagonist, or a rival, but I can only think of her as the youngest child of an annoying neighbor. It’s probably tied to the fact that I don’t generally enjoy Gamer fics and she has that as an ability. One of the draws to the ability is that they can think calmly and rationally or whatever at all times, but they actually end up acting like massive idiots or jerks. Favorite region? I want to say Hoenn because Emerald was my first game, but I’m actually gonna go with either Lental or Almia.