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Author, ur plot , choosen timeline , system use..is too good.. But i think there is problem in ur writing way..i understand tht writting a story, or plot is difficult..as i know some time i also tried but chod diya vich me.. But bro missing essence tht i think is tht u r not building tht characters, how the party grow..u r skipping these parts. U r just telling story from one person view..and sometime it is bit problem too understand year, or time But in whtever way u will write, i will read every one of ur chapter..
may be u should put study camp for all those who r converted muslims , so tht they can get back to their roots...in this way he also put rest at least some kind of..to rebellions against their land.. bcoz as know they can become radicals as fast as anyone eat their food
Hey, author in u talked about the muslim religion, than wht happened to Christianity ..i know they less in no. but they r present , like dutch teachers in navy...and what happened in srilanka... really want to know the reactions of Mohammed and foreigner traders, specially british one...