Comments of chapter undefined of Half-Blood Prince's Tale

please ruin potter.

Please ruin the life of Potter and his rabid dog.

I always hated potter and his friends. Bully all of them. If it was harmless prank like changing color of hair, clothes then that would have been funny. But no, they prank slytherin and humilated them especially cannon severus. Hope here potter is put to place.

Yes!!! Take Lily for yourself, boy!!!

Well I wanted slytherin....but I guess this I fine...he can still interact with the black sisters without repercussions since he is ravenclaw and from the fandom slytherins are much more friendly to ravenclaws as compared to gryffindor and hufflepuff

Author, will severus focus entirely on magic or will he at least spend a little time training his physique? Or maybe in the future he can create some kind of potion that improves his physique. It would be more refreshing to humiliate Potter and Black just using fists than using magic. Also, people in the wizarding world neglect their bodies a lot. There are spells that can be easily dodged if you have good agility and reflexes. Just my opinion. (Google translate)

Please RUIN the Marauders!

I still dont understand how lily evans in canon left snape because of a small mistake but stayed with james even though he continuously bullied her former friend

The prank demon bully arrives. Sirius I get being a rebel kid with literal monsters in his home but Potter is just a spoiled brat that never got a beating. The Weasley twins were alot better in pranking. Thanks for the chapter.

Ravenclaw! Please what he needs the most is personal strength so its gonna be hard for him to be Voldemort level strength in a matter of 7 years with all the petty conflicts in Slytherin. Potter should be put in his place that is behind the mc and irrelevant but don’t make him all 1 dimensional bad, he’s just a kid bully that can be rectified with a few broken bones and if it doesn’t work then public humiliation.

Not sure how to feel. on the one hand it was up for vote and Ravenclaw won. Cool I can keep reading and if I like the story then great and if I don't I'll drop it. It isn't a big deal. On the other from what has been shown of his character/personality, ambitions, and the lengths he is willing to go (kill or experiment on his "father") I honestly think that putting it up to vote is/was ridiculous and he should be defaulted into Slytherin. Add that to the fact that this is a rewrite of a story you did before in which he was sorted into Slytherin and I feel that perhaps you should have stuck with Slytherin. That being said is it possible to do both. Ie you yourself said that the Ravenclaw one would be slower to update, have you bring in more OC characters, and have Sev graduate from Hogwarts faster (not necessarily early but not enough happens to him to bother writing about it so his 7 years in Hogwarts can be condensed into 7-10 chapters instead of the 20+ or so chapters that would/could have been if sorted into Slytherin). So why not have a Slytherin version of the story and a Ravenclaw one. I mean all the set up is done by this chapter so it wouldn't be to hard to just copy and redo all the chapters up to 24 and publish them as an alternative or slytherin version would it?

I am a bit disappointed but it's alr, I guess I'll stockpile the chaps. Thanks for all you hard work author and all the chaps! [img=recommend]

Thanks for the chapter

Bring pay back to James Potter

Good bye Potter onwards the Lily train

Thanks!

im not sure if its canon or fanon but the reason he bullied severus specifically was because he was close to lilly, and potter had a crush on her, simply put he was jealous.

curious, all the fanfics that james appears he ends up being a horrible character kkkk

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