where is the rest of the chapter?

i don't actiually agree with that. while Dancing isn't necessary, IT does elevate the Performance to the next lvl. Bieber, Chris Brown, Usher,mj. were all good singers but what Made Them stand out was their Dancing. acting is a good Skill to have for any Person in Front of the camera. at the very least it will be helpfull for His own Mvs.

i understand. from my point of view no matter what, if you write a story going for 600-1000+ chapters you will never avoid repetitivness. my first xianxia was panlong and because i was new to the genre i finished it, the first and last xianxia i would ever finish because even though i love the concept of cultivation the repetitvness didn't escape my notice starting from the second novel,regardless of expanded activities like alchemy, talisman making or array making etc.. while you might expand his activities to acting, directing, corporate managment and what not, the essence of the story, of aweing the masses and watching the reactions still remains the same no matter what. so the repetitivness will still set in. so a music focused story with 300 chapters and then a spin off, movie focused, or smth. i would actually prefer, although that might just be a matter of taste. the most important part of writing a story is to know when to end it.

i don't Like where this Story ist heading. this jack of all Trades kinda Thing ist seriously Off Putting. i expected a Story about a Dude with a music system, doing music. but he Just does everything Like there weren't Just 24 hours in a day. programming, Game development, acting, drawing, scriptwriting, im assuming directing as Well and we haven't even reached chapter 100 yet. where is this gonna end? a more focused Story is what i' d prefer. many of similar Stories do this and music Always gets pushed to the Sideline. let me guess is CEO of his own company next.

Here comes snapes talent

wait He Said ITS a Translation? this ist definately a Story on ff so someone ist lying either this author or the one one ff

Dante's Harem by EroticaAuthor69xxx on fanfiction. straight Up Just changed MCs Name from Dante to Darwin. he did mention this ist an edited Story but he could at least give Credit to the og. Not Sure If ITS a straight Copy with Name Change, i am too lazy to Check maybe someone else can verify IT.

cool, but its still just a transformation that he needs to activate by pressing a button, nothing prevents him from being killed without warning before he can turn into a devil an angel or whatever nephilim you mentioned. not to mention the limit on his lifesan as a human will very quickly become an issue, his skills both as devil and angel will need to be trained as they surely don't come natural to him afterall he is merely transforming into one of their kind he will not have the same intuitive skill

you think any chump can just recreate the evil piece or brave saint system? the reason i say its useless is because sure he can take advantage of their weakness but its not like thats anything new. the angels and devils have faught one another for millenia, at first their might be an element of surprise by it but once his sacred gear is known its the same old stuff.

seems boring and bland i also don't quite understand the use of his sacred gear. angel/devil he can turn into an angel or devil for a limited time(5min). in a world of only humans and maybe yokai, that might be an interesting concept but in dxd it just seems so utterly useless, i just don't see the point, there are ways to become a devil or an angel already, so why?

are you kidding me? did i just pay for this

9.11 m

jack of all can't become a master because he lacks time, being an immortal, i doubt he faces the same issues.

there was a sword dude.

dude.

why would you ask for your lawyer in a bank?

at first i thought it was just a typo but you do know its Canis Lycaon right? not lyacon. its derived from canis lupus lycaon, the timberwolf.

nothing surprising about the stages, what is an issue is the fact that the names of these stages change every chapter.

Lucy paid 70k rent though. are you rure about that?

he got stronger when he got his tattoos too.