Raj_Shah_7152
there are so many bad things in 1st few chap...1st is how he just rush to a quest way over his lvl with no plan instead of lvling a bit to make it easier...2nd u make him meet the girl way too soon it feels forced...3rd he just got way too lucky like kill a monster in the dungeon get 1 of best skill and that skill is the only way he could do the quest if he didnt get it idk how he couldve killed the necromancer...and some more about pacing grammar dmg scaling but thats just the major point,pls dont make the mc god of luck in just 5 chapters
ok I dont understand the dmg or how he is doing so.much dmg at the beginning, he still using the same sword. everyone is hitting like 5 dmg but he is doing 10x of that 5 dmg. No increase in str just 15 vitality for highest stats, same weapon but now he is doing 1500 on crit, so now he is doing 300x his dmg which would be at 5 dmg. The skills he using is slash I guess, not mentioning how much dmg increases for using it in a perfect swing.