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Downery

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  • Downery
    Downery2mth
    Posted

    Was okay. The MC was a little stupid and his first beast doesn't seem to listen to him sometimes but at least it was loyal. The minute the MC decided he wanted to have relations with his potential second beast and it started to turn into romance, I lost complete interest. Despise the pokegirl concept and I despise any beast taming story where MC will have sex with his trained pets. Turned into utter garbage.

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    The Unique Guardian Beast Master in Cultivation World
    Eastern · Lucky blood and harvest year
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    Downery5mth
    Posted

    Feels like a story written by chatgpt. I want to like it more but I can't because of this fake feeling. And webnovel barely gives enough chapters to see if this gets better or not. From what webnovel allows me to read for free, not worth paying money for.

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    Summit Farmer
    Urban · Tree Of Eternity
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  • Downery
    Downery5mth
    Commented

    I want to like it but it feels like it's AI generated. The entire first chapter feels mechanical, not a stilted kind of writing style but literally written by a machine. No one talks like in the US. Saying people's full name in conversation, what makes it worse is that it's supposed to be a conversation between family. I'm hoping it's just a bad translation and that the story was written by a Chinese writer pretending to know how things are done in the US.

    Ch 1 New Life
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    Summit Farmer
    Urban · Tree Of Eternity
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  • Downery
    Downery1yr
    Posted

    It's a scam, don't read. It starts off amazing and fun but then around chapter 170 it turns into a Google translate translation and becomes unreadable. There's also no more paragraphs and becomes just one huge paragraph with no breaks. Pretty much just turns into a piece of garbage trying to rip you off and steal your money and time.

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    I Have 10 Training Avatars
    Games · Flying Jade Dragon 3,000,000
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  • Downery
    Downery1yr
    Posted

    Holy Jesus how much did the author pay to get the reviews to 4.9? This is a typical self ejaculating story that isn't even mediocre compared to the other self masterbatory stories out there. Is it the worst I've ever read? No. Is it something I'd ever recommend to anyone? No. But It's bad enough that I stopped reading even though I've caught up to most of the stories I've been keeping up with even though I'm bored as hell right now.

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    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • Downery
    Downery1yr
    Commented

    I'm still not sure when they made a bond. I thought he just brought the worm home but never made a contract. Did I just accidentally skip past it while reading?

    Ch 25 D+ Soul Growth!
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    Pet Simulator
    Eastern · Xia Shuqin
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  • Downery
    Downery1yr
    Commented

    Makes sense. Water, wood or sunlight. Sunlight power seems like it could make things interesting

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Vismian Grass
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    My Farm System: Reaching The Top In The Parallel Earth!
    Fantasy · KenceRussel
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  • Downery
    Downery1yr
    Posted

    Read up to chapter 79. Started off okay but spiraled into garbage pretty fast. Story is bad enough I wanted to warn people not to get tricked by the rating but not bad enough I'd rack my brain to make a long winded review. Read at your own risk.

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    Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!
    Fantasy · Crimson_ink
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  • Downery
    Downery1yr
    Commented

    Jesus christ. If it wasn't for the high reviews I would've stopped reading at this chapter. There's no way his flaw is being changed to "must answer all questions with the truth" instead of "can not lie" because one is bearable to read and the other would make this story into complete garbage. Please buddah, have the MC just keep his mouth shut.

    Ch 17 Three Simple Words
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Downery
    Downery1yr
    Replied to Shadow_Gamer1

    Agreed. Poop is an acquired taste

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    Old Ancestor: Thrown Out By The Nanny From The Start
    Urban · Break The Corn
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  • Downery
    Downery2yr
    Commented

    So surivial is less important then questioning one traitor out of hundreds, thousands and maybe millions more he can find.

    Ch 11 I Won't Fall Here
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    I Only Wanted A Class In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · ranmaro
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  • Downery
    Downery2yr
    Commented

    This was a bit much. It has passed the point of being funny into the realm of utter garbage. Just how many times is watching someone slip on a banana peel funny? So author decided to change it into slipping on a banana and breaking both legs to make it funnier? Garbage chapter.

    Ch 11 In Cliches, the One That Seems the Least Likely to Be the Culprit Is Usually the Culpri
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    I Just Won't Play By The Book
    Eastern · 7 Percent
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  • Downery
    Downery2yr
    Commented

    So did being reborn turn him into a kid mentally? Because he's acting like a literal 10 year old trying to lie about not eating the cookie.

    Ch 9 It really is just 1%
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    Reincarnated at Level Two Million
    Action · Alphachoas
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  • Downery
    Downery2yr
    Commented

    Is this going to be an occuring theme in this story? Try to kill me and I'll let you leave alive?

    Ch 39 Timely Assistance
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    Global Game: AFK In The Zombie Apocalypse Game
    Games · Empire Black Knight
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  • Downery
    Downery2yr
    Posted

    Missing words, letters, paragraphs being split randomly. Seems interesting but hard to get into because of all the mistakes. No one's perfect but I expect better when someone is writing a novel meant to be read by potentially thousands of people.

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    Multi-Gene
    Sci-fi · Typhlix
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  • Downery
    Downery2yr
    Posted

    Is it paid reviews? Self destruct uses soul power. MC starts to feel tired after using self destruction a couple of times but keeps doing it over and over and over without worrying that he might not ressurect if he has too low soul power. It might be the translation but it also feels like it was written by a teenager.

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    Global Reincarnation: Becoming A God With My Unlimited Revive
    Fantasy · One Punch Cute King
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  • Downery
    Downery2yr
    Replied to sxliih

    I'd rather not get known as a beta player and get hunted down by millions of people when the worlds combine. Especially if I have a little sister that I love and I'm trying to protect. He somehow knows they aren't going to talk about this in the forums? Not tell other people? He was a slave and lived a horrendous life but suddenly his life experience is thrown away and the author turns him into an idiot.

    Ch 28 Eye of the tornado
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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • Downery
    Downery2yr
    Replied to Lordcanute

    This is what happens when an idiot that's never played games decides to write a gaming novel.

    Ch 17 Lucky start
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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • Downery
    Downery2yr
    Replied to Elsvado

    Makes you feel like Chinese players are a different breed everytime I read these gaming stories. I've been a gaming nerd my whole life and never encountered this. Only when you f up in a competitive game have I heard and read so much trash talking, otherwise you literally get ignored or ignore everyone else.

    Ch 8 Body tempering
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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • Downery
    Downery2yr
    Commented

    I can see someone is a fan of Lord of the Mysteries. The problem is the author has to be smart to pull off a Trickster type character and so far all I'm seeing is the story would've been better if it was titled God of Idiots instead. Adding that elite girl as a love interest also lowered alot of good points the story could've had even further. If the author actually paid attention when he read Lord of The Mysteries, he would know that the fact that the MC didn't get a love interest in the first 10 chapters was a reason people loved it.

    Ch 19 Reason
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    God of Tricksters
    Fantasy · Fixten
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