DarkHelixDragoon24
somewhat i cant read it feel fast and null. i really dont feel anything to read this everything is fast.He is not stop he is always in rush so i cant look with mc pov.he is like non-stop machine.Will he slow down in the future? because if its still like this sorry about that but i cant read so pls reply
MC doing multiple things at a time while thinking too many things, i mean, even the marvel superheroes lives their lives as is an be a hero when needed. its just MC is not a robot man, he is a person, you are supposed to consider that, superman do not act like he is in a hectic situation all the time, there are only so much you can do in a span of days even as a super powered being, physically, MC can handle months of none stop actions but what about mentally and emotionally? you got to remember ge was just a human till recently