Comments of chapter undefined of Omnipotent Destroyer

Start feels sorta rushed but hopefully the pacing slows down a bit.

Too rushed and you could make the mc a little less naive as this will help him in tricking other people or anything as even if he is a bad guy now doesn’t mean he knows everything

thats like John Snow was betrayed and ´´killed´´ :D

This felt like one of those fever dreams where everyone turns on you

The scene depicted in this chapter reminds me exactly of the way Julius Caesar was stabbed by all the members of the senate. This is truly another masterpiece of the same act.

yaaasss

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I was going to read this because I thought he would come back in like 50 chapters to get his revenge but I can’t don’t want to be thinking when mc will come get his revenge and keep asking author the same questions all over again.

Interesting start. 🙂

This is good for the first chapter but it's a little too much fast-paced for me but I enjoy it. ^_^

You deserved that boi!

He just have wrong people around to apply kindness to.

portraying the peaceful life at the start was beautiful but the next part, the mafia thing and killing him could have been much better. I'm a bit disappointed. hope the pace and flow would match later on.

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Will he get his revenge if not I’m out I hate mc’s that transmigrate with unfinished Businesses???

Good!

Thank you for editing this chapter , I wanted to give it a shot but couldn't even stomach the cringefest it was previously to even finish the first chapter. Much better and I am glad I was too lazy to remove this from my library.

You've faced betrayal because you don't keep it on you

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola