Comments of chapter undefined of Dungeons Online

This is such a odd start. I literally understand nothing.

bruh this is a mess start my brain cant comprehend this hahahah

My complaint isn't that you stated in the middle or that your grammar is bad. my complaint is that it was boring, unchallenging, and arrogant. Am I supposed to like that he is wasting time in a starter dungeon for noobs while being more experienced and supercilious about it?

wth?

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I didn't read this book at all but added it to my library many times, it's just that its title and theme is so similar to a novel that I read in royalroad( dungeon core online) that I went to read that instead of this novel

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

well, this is a nice start. unless there is no expository in the next chapter.

Worst start ever! Feels like I started reading this novel at chapter 5.....Think this guy forgot to upload the prologue.

A start in medias res

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