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i would like to add one more thing please develop mc's dungeon as it is a story about a dungeon master. if you need some inspiration about that then there is the novel " dungeon without a system" on a royal road it had 40 chaps last I checked might give you direction for the dungeon.
I thought there was different religion given that gods are different there in chapter 1
although I liked the concept of the story I would like to mention a few points 1. story Is progressing very fast-paced in the development of modern techs without much reference to how mc developed it( even though he doesn't have much of a cheat other than the memory of a world in form of a dream). 2. I am getting that you are trying to make a villain of that anti magic faction but they are creating trouble when MC is a non-magic person is not getting to me. 3. I still don't have a proper image of your world in 9 chaps. 4. I think you should read "i-m-the-king-of-technology" just for reference.
https://comrademao.com/novel/legendary-pet-shop/
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this is one of the best reincarnation novels I have read on webnovel. story development is good, characters design is also good, harem doesn't appear to be forced, MC is also not thinking with his lower body, MC is not a slave of the system, etc. while the story is good there are a few points desired in the story according to me 1. first is there are too many grammatical errors, sometimes spelling mistakes, sometimes name changes. So I think the author should take a few days' break and correct those mistakes as it will hurt him in the long run 2. MC is severely underusing his system. while the title of the novel is "I Can Make Everything Level UP" MC is not using his system to level things up ( or at least it appears to like that in the novel). 3. MC is not using his modern knowledge enough, I can understand MC was some king of genius on earth but he should be able to copy some simple things from earth. (the only thing I have seen him make is a crossbow but even that is after he saw someone else using it)( till chap 230 at the very least)
this novel is full of cliche moments, face slapping and dangerous levels of nationalism and racism. I have read it till 200 chaps on MTL finally I couldn't tolerate that level of racism and had to stop reading it
you changed the dino from t rex to carnotour ( I don't know why you used modern dino names in the first place, could have used any names )