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Story seems really interesting and engaging so far.
this is a great novel but can also be a great game. imagine fighting goblins and taking in loots. its like I can enjoy the best of both worlds
The flow of the story is good. I'm just having a hard time understanding some parts because the sentences felt awkward for me to read. Anyway, this is just the start so I am hoping that it would be a bit better in the future chapters.
I liked it! not much else to give but Good luck and have fun writing it!
