Comments of chapter undefined of V for Vampire

Might wanna add System tag, so people who dont like it can avoid it. Im not a fan of a story that is just about training to get more stats/skills.

Don't use emojis

trash grammar... needs someone to correct it

please be careful with the POV, sometimes your POV jumped from 1st to 3rd in a single paragraph. that's just messy.

I'm honestly a little confused by this first chapter. The writing is a little messy. But the premise sounds good.

how did he die...

this is so bad 🤢🤮

Constructive criticism here. Please use the capitalized version of I.

near the end, it should be "live a simple and happy life" not "leave a simple and happy life".

Bem, mais um escravo do sistema. AFF, o cúmulo das fictions ridículas.

would be better without levels

bro the grammer its so bad

Hey author you should fix your grammar

thank

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thanks for the chapter 💖

Thx for chap

Thanks