Comments of chapter undefined of The Saint and the Void

( Written with the help of the translator ) I like that one. He is following an interesting pace and he is only saying what is necessary to facilitate his new life in this world, instead of telling her that her existence was decided by a Human with a pencil and paper. Overall, continue with the good work author! If you want a hint from me, try to ignore the complaints of the Protagonist getting too low (kneeling and serving) or saying certain information. It takes a decent interaction for a story to develop. Soon, it is perfectly fine everything you have done so far, just avoid exaggerating too much in the actions more 'servants', because it can end up crossing the line sometimes.