Comments of chapter undefined of Inverse System
Inverse System
Wizzez
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personally the story kind of seems like a shitshow because for some reason the main character who is portrayed as overly strong isn't at all strong when it comes to an actual competition and then he basically is done with the match because he absolutely lost and every way possible because he's a goddamn idiot and instead of the author letting that be a repercussion and a teaching moment instead the author decides to use the systems inventory as a way to still let the main character pass and in all honesty it's a little bit of a scummy move because clearly the main character isn't at all thinking about anything that he should be and is instead being stupid and when he has an intelligent step that is absurdly high you'd at least expect him to not make stupid choices every turn of this book. Personally I'm going to drop it but even though I just ranted so much on it I don't think it's a bad story I just think that the writing is not where it should be for a story that is trying to go in such a unique Direction
Yeah, fair enough I guess đ . I see a lot of my inexperience in these earlier chapters. Though I think I was trying to show a progression in character from a careless main character to a more methodical one in the future. I wanted a close call that would teach him that, and this is what I opted for. I think I could've executed it a little better, but it's too late now đ . Thanks for at least giving it a chance past the time skip though! I appreciate it đ
first things first: his INT stats is way too high (i really don't have to explain why right?) secondly: the power scaling seems off too. you have the mc portrayed as someone op because of the op system (big BIG advantage over "spring ability users") and then in this chapter it seemed like he wasn't anything "special". i know he didn't go all out but considering his system even just a bit of his strength should have quite literally dominated everyone in this qualifying round. reality: he actually "struggled".
