blazuki
while creating harem is good ...... but too many girls in a harem will ruin it .. [[ once a wise woman said : too much of anything is poison ]]
Lots of fluffy, cute romance in this chapter, with a pinch of humor (peeping elder that will report everything). Planning a wedding is a bit fast, but you, author, are completely correct - this is basically a medieval world, they are supposed to already look for a partner. Ironically, this idea might be even an advantage - it's rare, even in harem stories, for marriage to happen this soon. R18 scenes? Yes. Romantic reception? Right now, I can't name even a single fic that survived long enough to describe it. One thing that slightly scares me is the pinky - she is sc*m, a sadistic seducer. She doesn't deserve to be a concubine of the MC. It's clear that you're aiming at the harem, but there should be some standards, not every girl deserves to basically become a goddess. Most importantly, she is too much of a side character - as the only girl in pairing it would be something new. As the 143rd concubine, she is just another pokemon in his collection - boring and meaningless, soon to be forgotten. Completely unrelated to romance - I liked how he handled the treasure hunt - pretending that he was never there, shamelessly accepting his share of money despite already finding priceless artifacts. All to avoid attention and jealousy. It's all that I want to see in truly cunning, clever, and experienced MCs.