The_Novel_Man
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Nice start but I advice that you work on your grammar as it is a very important factor with readers Description also needs a bit of work but nonetheless a rather captivating read Also, my condolences to you over the loss of your friend.
thanks for the chapter
you should. though may I ask how you changed your books cover? I'm trying to figure it out hehe
Hi friend. I truly admire the fact you even named MC for late friend Tagar. I hope this goes successful
So far, Iâm fascinated. I look forward to reading more!
Hey author, did you stop writing this novel? When will you continue updating the chapters?
Not much to say, either than that it's interesting so far and the grammar could use some working on.
Condolences for your friend, also I like the novel so far so you certainly made a good tribute
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good start
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Romance???
Good start
nice
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Wow such friendship! Amazing narrations by the way. đ
Just from reading your note I can tell Yer a chad
Nice start...can't say much about grammar since its also the bane of my existence