Comments of chapter undefined of The Adventurer System

a great story line so far, but this needs serious editing. I don't want to stop reading, but it's really hard to want to continue at times.

Pls work on the grammer but im goong to keep reading

The story sounds like it could be nice but the grammar is so bad that it makes it quite hard to read. Too hard for me, unfortunately, so I am dropping it here.

hmm, hope no harem trash will ruin this. so far its interesting, hope he goes solo. Monk or whatever is the close combat class is the best choice for him obviously

I like the story so far but the author really needs to do some editing with the gramer

I like the addition of a hardcore mode, with only 1 life

A journey starts with a single step!

Use Grammarly, its free to use to edit.

You should Edit Or have someone do it for you since im enjoying the story but im getting confused

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Thanks