See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I'm afraid that the so called ancient one has missed the point this is not one of your run of the mill stoies that follows the pack all great stories weather by Robert A.Hineline or any other of the greats all started off with the intention of building the background of the storie first in order to setup what comes next one building block at a time as time goes on you will begin to experience a story full of life and what can only be described as edge of your seat grit while this may be a bit soon to say that this stories will go that way I see the possibility of this author making that happen give it time and we will see

How's it possible for a skelliton to roar. Great chapter by the way

it's kind of amusing the he does things in the wrong order , not even considering how long it will take even if he succeeds the tree will loose its potency the longer it sits there he should have done some expearemrintauon using the ruins first have them all set up beforehand

Interesring

great ending to a spectacular battle

There simply can be no words to describe what is happenung when to great wills.collide this way it is also very sad one must die so that one of them may live

For this scene, the Aouthor has nailed it what the reader experience here is how it must be , this is how its done every nerve racking moment to the pulse of one's ever straning heart beat the will to perserve in the moment this is where one's metal is tested to the fullest.

Yes it doesn't matter what the authors intended direction might have Ben it all comes down to the quality of the wrighting itself (stong visualality that pulls the reader in inspite of himself,outstanding coriography and the dance of death on the head of a.pin, an axistance on the razors edge of life and death wounce a story has all of this nothing else really maters

Who says that where they are at right now is inside that cripep they could just as easily be in a location that corresponds with the dungeon yet outside of its actual location this dungeon is very good at using spatial anomalys and connecting them to other places what is a dungeon when you get right down to it nothing more than interconted locations

This will be interesting how will Ed respond when that ogre is going to say something along the line of (you again why have you come back here) Hahaha

This is an author that does it right when it comes to thinking outside the box and carries it off in a way that makes sense without it being to over the top

This one has the luck of the dammed

now it begins, the battle royal may the best entity win

does this mean that anyone who fights from long range are all cowards no it does not it comes down to what one is good at where your strengths lie

The personality of this Duma does not fit the racial characteristics of the orch race and seams like the author forgot what he rote regarding this rocks character go back to his behavior at that secret meeting that took place between the four chiefs in forming there alliance does his behavior seem like that of a coward seems like a strong orck to me one that is willing to fight for his beliefs and then look at him during the battle the only reason the fighting was brought to and end was because of the barrier he was at the front the hole tume

I have to say for an A-Class this guy is far to meak and mild it's as if all forms of confrontation has been beat out of him

I disagree with that thought you know you are loosing out on something what that something is, will remain unknown there fore you are getting shafted admit it and move on

This is what it means to be taken away from being the keyboard jokey and to acutely being forced to feeling the pain of what it means for all those spells and close quarters combat moves it means living on the edge every moment

It all starts with a strong foundation in whatever your field of study may be . magic or as a worrier