Comments of chapter undefined of Survival Journey

a beaitiful first chapter ❤

I love the poetic introduction! The punctuation does need some tweaking however

WOWWWW the starting is amazing!

I really love the start of this book. its portray that strong emotions of the protagonist. I really can't wait to know how she survived.

Wow 👏👏

Wow such an amazing intro! Now I'm getting giddy! Moving on👉

Oooooooo....alpha female, author you just hit the jackpot ❤️❤️

“……(Sniff).” Here it is, again. I ran away from home. How many times have it been…? Oh, how many times have I wished and longed my family to take me back. …But then again, that place…? It’d be better if I don’t return. It was a nightmare. They would say I’m worthless; Their never ending abuse; …I had no one else but myself now. Haha… what’s the point in having a family, then? They… broke me. They shattered me. They’ve made me cried nearly all my life. No more… …I’m tired. This— will be the last time I cried. Just you wait. I will definitely make those who called me worthless to lick my feet. ……………… Ever since that night that I’ve vowed— I became the alpha female I’ve dreamed of becoming today. So why am I still not satisfied…?