Comments of chapter undefined of No Otaku with Harem System (English Version)

just continue with the state of the story while gradually changing its style to implement a steady increase in the quality. we're currently already invested in this version of your Mc and would appreciate watching the Mc's development and increased interactions with the rest of the characters,similar to how one piece quality kept increasing over the years.

Honestly in my honest Try fix it rather then Try to re make it since lot more harder then fix because honestly i love it so for i don't see a problem personaly

Do what you feel most confident in doing whatever it may be.

Keep writing and gradually but surely make changes. Even switching to third-person narrative isn't terrible. Yes, and as for me, in general, everything was fine with you and the only complaint is that the story is about the harem, but all interaction with the girls is actually skipped. Not to mention 18+, which is perplexing because of the frank thrust of the story. But! It is important to emphasize here that you should not turn the story into a chat! Sometimes a few paragraphs of descriptions are enough rather than a few pages of conversations! You need a normal balance between dialogues and descriptions. With descriptions, everything is fine with you, and the dialogues are also not bad, just their number is small and there is a tendency to monologues.

2nd option pls👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Continue with the story please and do the changes that you see fit but make sure that mc gets all the wifus.

Although it may take longer I would choose the first option if you r really unhappy with it or getting a lot of comments, if not I would just continue as is

I think the first option is the best choice, with this you will have more time to make your history and think about what you want for. Good luck for whatever option you choose.

It's fine to explain the Mc's plans, just not to the point that a chapter is mostly filled with the monologue of the Mc.

i think mc should stay the same but just not as much monologue.

mejor sigue la historia y vas mejorandolo en el camino , da mucha flojera que reinicies la historia

do as you want, because this is your work

I know it's been a long time, but remember, constructive criticism is fine, but pointless, moralizing complaints are not. The story is first and foremost YOURS, so write it in a way that suits your tastes and if there are tips that help you improve and you agree, great, but you don't need to write what others like, but what YOU like, if you don't do this writing will become a chore my friend.

Well even though i'm 2 months late to give any suggestions and looking at the chapter count it seems you went continuing. If it were me, yes even though as a reader the stories been fun and entertaining but its also frustrating with the constant monologue of the Mc and majority of them are just his head going crazy with the constant contradictions of the MC'S character which is going nowhere and with little to no development.. But! Thats why the story is amazing cause you can IMPLEMENT progress of his character cause really.. the build up is already "Overflowing" and if theres no little to no development a lot of serious readers will be frustrated and it will made the story bland. Overall Your doing good job as an author and keep Progressing! The path of progression is everlasting find your own path and stick to it!

thx maybe consider using deepl

I would love to see you continue writing it loving the story so far but If you are having problems continuing or really want to re-write I would say do it because it’s your story to tell.

Author my opinion is that you should make him change his opinion slowly while building the stronghold with his harem helping him and easing him to accept them and should give 2 of the girl who will definitely be loyal to mc spiral energy and ki is Yuriko and Saeko This is my opinion don’t have to take my opinion You do you this is your book not mine