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Why don't you try to recruit him and make him become a better human? It may be perverted, after all we all are, but on an acceptable level, you know, it would be a good change of pace to have an Issei who is actually useful and thinks about things.
There are two important things I think he should be doing for now, the first being something that converts low level souls into a higher soul form and the second being a way to improve his mental capabilities (things like thinking faster, more logical, have a better memory to remember the story, etc)
I've just read your other story and it's also good, but I found this one more interesting, if possible I would like that in this story you try to take things a little slower and explore more of the worlds you visit, in the other story it was too fast and there was barely time to absorb something that happened before something else came along.
An interesting idea would be to try to create a storage scroll with a shared space, say in a way that by placing an item in two different scrolls they ended up in the same space, that way the protagonist would be able to leave a clone in his house creating seals of paper for it and placing it on the parchment and the protagonist in the middle of the mission would be able to access the same space with the new items that the clone placed.
To be honest the first time you introduced Thanos with a whole chapter I found it boring and I didn't like it, but now that you introduced the Chitauri and their history I found it very interesting because it was something I didn't know and I thought it was really cool to learn about that, my opinion about that is keep it up, I found it interesting to learn more in depth about these characters or civilizations.
Honestly, what Winry did was completely irresponsible and she even tried to hide the key, even though in the end it wouldn't work because they would use the car to get back, but even so Alfonzo was passed out from tiredness and she drives like that without caring about him in the backseat and she leaves with just a tap on the wrist, at the very least there would have to be a conversation about how irresponsible she was. That's just my opinion.
Yep, the women's issues in this story are getting on my nerves, I think I'll let the chapters pile up before coming back here as I lost interest in reading with this random confession. This is just my opinion, as the story itself is good, there are just a few things I don't like so I'll stop for now.
The story is cool so far, but the only point that bothers me and is slowly making me lose interest is the fact that you add girls around the protagonist all the time, but that's just my preference, I don't like stories with too many girls involved so meaninglessly