Comments of chapter undefined of Chronicles of Sprigladel: Tale of Two Tales
Chronicles of Sprigladel: Tale of Two Tales
evilmunky45
Chapter comments4
okay, since you did this with the paragraphs, please ignore my comments about that đ . this is a really good chapter for this character, the more you read, the more you could feel her personality change. I can't wait to see how she develops later on. I. Need. More!
Wow! Okay so your writing has improved dramatically since the first chapter or even the prologue. Like the format is really good, so much improvement on this chapter. And the grammar has been good! It is very descriptive. It's a lot of reading, but I like that a lot, I can really see it all happening in my imagination. There's a few mistakes sprinkled here and there but you write a lot so am guessing it is bound to happen. Ta'ro seems to have found conviction! This hasn't been updated in so long though. Author will you be writing more?
