Comments of chapter undefined of Percy Jackson: The God of sea and magic

It wasn’t the worst I’ve ever read, but I could definitely go without reading *** scenes. Just make sure to imply when he has ***, so we know when he hooks up with hestia and hera.

Well, I now stop writing *** scenes because I suck at it but I will mention how their night fun. Thank you for reading.

Thanks for chapter and you can give him power over destiny so no prophecy can affect him

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Your writing has room for improvement but it's the plot I'm most interested in since I never thought of a possibility where there is an SI God paired up with the best Godesses.

Amphitrite

why did he so suddenly go for amphrite?

Gracias por el capitulo, me encanta esta historia donde poseidon es el mc. Estoy a la espera de los próximos capítulos.

i think it would have worked better mentioning it, than deep diving into it

Its fine

Keep going please 🤩👌

Its Not the worst but try not to rush it.

Thank

Só não se esqueça da paranoia de zeus

thanks

👍

Thanks for chaps dude

Thanks for the chapter