Comments of chapter undefined of The Rise of Quetzalcoatl

Suddenly it started getting warm .. 🤭

for all the persons that didn't want the yuri ship I just have one thing to say....

Thanks for the chapter !

plot twist, next chapter involves mia stabbing lucy and making her mental issues even worse

Thanks for the chapter

Seems like Mia and Lucy are both missing something in their life. Her parents most likely told her to get close to her, and this is the approach she is taking, but she wouldn’t have gone for a kiss if she was being forced. She would have seen it below her.

Reading this makes me so giddy!

thanks for the chapter and thanks again for the YURI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

“Please be a secret door, please be a secret door. YAY! 😂😂😂

despite having nothing against Yuri, but it wasn't very fast, was it? I thought that they and the other girls would start getting along first !! and that warm feeling of hers seemed to me artificial

For the Author, I mean this is the most respectful and positive manner. The difference between novels like this one which are “mid-pack” in the Golden Ticket rankings and the top ten is pacing. For example the newest top 10 White Online grinds every character interaction out, and (using the love interest as an example) leaves no suprisse and has the audience anticipating them getting together. Here (and a few other times) this seems a little fast, leaving me wanting to see more of their interactions and character. So in short, my advice is to slow down a bit, and let events develop a little more before executing them. This being said, I am very much enjoying this novel and am excited to see where it goes. Keep up the good work!

cheesy. i love it.

Yuri!!!!! :)

author when we say F bullies this isn’t what we mean 😦

Thanks yous for the chap!

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Thx for the chap