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Comments of chapter undefined of Fortune's Chosen - The Legend of Ivo

Deb_Nath_6301
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The last few chapters has all been filled with Kingdom building stuff. Somethings can be briefly stated.. we don't need multiple chapters for that. it gets boring. I had to skip through most of the stuff.. and he says that he relies on, only his strength, but since a number of chapters there have been no character growth in strength. He says that he has it all. Since the world has so many elements why does the author not explore those branches. Getting nature element only and heavily relying on mana. Since he has such great aptitude, but author doesn't even try to push the character to more exploration. Strengthening the Kingdom is fine, but completely focusing on it. This story has lost the appeal. I don't want multiple chapters about what he did with his wife, etc.

Deb_Nath_6301
Deb_Nath_6301Lv1Deb_Nath_6301

Well it was just my opinion.. do your thing. But make sure everything is balanced out. Try to maintain character development in strength. I remember when I first started reading the starting chapters I was so hooked.

La_Boule:How many people, so many opinions, others, on the contrary, complain that events are going too fast, so I don't want to make long timeskips, yet.
NikTitanik866
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but no stats of his son?

NikTitanik866
NikTitanik866Lv3NikTitanik866

where new chap?

reading1dao1god
reading1dao1godLv7reading1dao1god

Autor-san your or ok ? Autor-san voce estĂĄ bem ?

Kami12
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ThanksThanks

boom_boom_8806
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IAwardRewards
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hey author, posi it already

KingSloth
KingSlothLv15KingSloth

Thanks for the chapter!

Rudranarayan_Nanda
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Where is his son's status?? And I think this story is too fast pace like a fan fiction

Ali_3193
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Thanks for the chapter

FastestOfAllSperm
FastestOfAllSpermLv2FastestOfAllSperm

No stat for son?

Rittu23
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thanks for the chapter

TagDaReaper
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Thanks for the chapter.

HuTaoBestGirl
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first, thanks for the chapter Author-san 👍