Comments of chapter undefined of Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

it is practically a cliche that all the stories where an oc is inserted, wants to return the philosopher's stone to flamel, seriously it is already very worn out but if you think logically, flamel is a magician of more than 400 years it would not be the first time that someone try to steal his stone. I'm not attacking your story, just the concept of returning the philosopher's stone, my friend is that I think from the point of view of flamel, my philosopher's stone was stolen, then a first year student even if he is intelligent tells me that he stole it and wants to return it, what would you think? 1. he returns it to me because he doesn't know how to use it 2. He believes that just by returning the stone I will teach him everything I know as I repeat your story it was fine, but to put this so that the mc returns the philosopher's stone has been used in so many fanfic that it could be said that it became cancon in the world of Harry Potter fanfic

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After this chapter I finally decided to just read and enjoy this as casual read and not worry about any plot holes or any inconsistencies as I am not taking this as a serious read.

At this rate the Flamels are gonna die before getting the letter

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

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Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Good chapter. He should release Kane Chronicles next since it's a little similar with the magic.

Don't worry over updating, If you have any problem deal with It and only then write. Just in case things happens an update with a short explanation is enough. Thanks for the Chapter.

Thank u for the triple update