Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

meh another ch skipped, noir is just boring, just a dark hero wannabe persona with all cliche check list ticked it kill all the charisma built for Quinn itself, also again i will say that this novel is becoming like a very volatile stock market... so many peaks and so many downs like a zig zag, since it wont get past canon i wonder if inst better just remove this from my library then put a remider in 3ish months to come back

unexpected dhoom 2 reference . love it

some sentences don't make sense. why make him weak against the 3 aroura's(don't know if that is spelt right). if he is weak against them 3 then he can't fight vorldemort. but overall it was good.

I just had a thought. If Quinn keeps taking away people's ability to use their hands then eventually won't some of them start learning to use other conduits or just start learning wand less magic. It would take time but if there's something humans are good at it adapting to difficult circumstances. It's also a chance for the author to make a really compelling antagonist later on in the novel.

what kind of idiocy is this.... You were attacked by a small army, a known dangerous criminal came and basically obliterated the said army and you threaten to force the said criminal with only 3 above average aurors... Then again, Wizards are idiots

if he can't even overpower 2 senior auror together how is he gonna fight against voldemort and his trained death eaters? and even if in this chapter reality has given him a slap he would still risk his life along with the life of people close to him.

Que su único plan de escape sea "Volar rápido e invisible" es muy decepcionante.

I gind it funny that they use the same tactics as the death eaters and still think they are the good guys

That "POP" and the bakana!!?!! Was the most hilarious part of the chapter hahahahaha Thanks for the chapter!!!!

I could tolerate a lot of nonsense in this fanfic but this chapter totally get the trophy in stupidity... Making the MC not sensitive enough to sense a tracker on himself (while he is supposedly very well connected to magic) and then even though he had a head start and flew away at his top speed, his pursuers still managed to catch up to him (even though the author himself said a few sentence later that the MC top speed can shake them off...) and during all this lunacy he didn't use apparition or use a portkey to leave immediately at the start for some reason? And what finally took the cup is that our MC with his unmatched magical reserves, still appeared so weak in front of his three pursuers.... A few spells from his persuas throwing him into shock and wonder so easily? So far this is the worst fighting scene I've read in this fanfic that didn't make any logic at all.

Wow now Hritick also crossef over to HP world XD

I thank you for the chapter.

gracias por el capitulo

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thx for the chapter

Thank you author-sama for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

What was dhoom 2 reference?

Thanks for the chapter