Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

that's it I m out I m going to search for toad exterminators then make a FF on them then I will post that on webnovel. rejoice frustrated readers I m going to found all hideous, maniacal and abominatic ways to utterly destroy pink toads with high pitch voice . I am tired of reading about toads for so long. hope i can find those hideous ways soon enough.

Youve killed any intrest people had in your story. Honestly used to look forward to future chapters when this started now i dread it the filler and excuses your going to throw at us to fill up your chapter and word count that add literally nothing to your story.

First off your writing is great but this arc is dragging (with frankly infuriating characterization) and, it doesn't matter what feedback we give you because you've already written ahead so it won't change anything. Seeing how you're making $3500 a month on p@treon our opinion is worth less than nothing. I'll revisit this story in January, I'm out.

Thanks for the chapter author but it’s about time you get rid of the pink toad

thanks for the chapter, I'm wondering just how long before the toad go, I mean a few weeks recording usage of dark artefacts on underage students would be enough to Azkaban but there is not a single hint of a move from Quinn. it start to get on my nerve, he could out her in a jiffy but as long he's not the one bothered it seem he won't move a finger ...

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Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

it was better not even have published

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

I wish I could use this to crush the annoying 'high inquisitor' Umbridge .

Thanks for the chapter, but this arc with Umbridge is too big, we need some action against the toad if it is more painful for her better, more so if it is humiliating.

Wait so Cho rattled out DA in original cause she was dissatisfied and not just because she was caught and forced to tell? And author, please ignore all these who are dissatisfied with Umbridge cause none of them knows how to write a story. The Umbridge arc added a lot of depth to the side characters. They are dissatisfied just cause they don't like Umbridge. And I don't know where they got the Idea that Quinn can sack Umbridge whenever he wants. His grandfather can but he can't. Understand the difference. And Umbridge hasn't done any substantial harm to Quinn and haven't affected their interest, so Quinn's grandfather won't take any actions either. Quinn is not an entitled brat who will bother his family just cause he wasn't satisfied with his school life.

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

hello sir author here Einlion is another author with good story ^^

I really really enjoyed it. Good job

Yeah it seems I guessed right. Despite all the damning proof he already has he is needlessly letting stuff go on and on to the point of firings when he doesn't need to. Didnt he tell harry a couple weeks? Am I misremembering that, because I'm fairly certain he said that too him. In all seriousness why is this part of the story being forced to happen all the way through for? Its obnoxious, unpleasant and irritating for the wasted chapters reading more and more bs from her work when he couldve already dealt with her with or without using his name to get it out there.

nice chapter