Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Honestly massively dissapointed with this yeah let me just promise to show some nosy girl what ive been stuggling and working towards for my whole time at the castle.

the only thing is disliked about the chapter is MC not noticing anyone was following him for MONTHS. He literally had an upgraded Marauders map that shows everything and you are telling me he never checked it even once?

got to be honest. even if it is integral to the story, I hate this interaction

I already didn't like Ivy, this just further cemented that

Daphne not that nosy! (and that's why she's the best waifu!) Thanks for the chapter!

This story has really started to become a letdown. It started off so good. Learning cool new magics while trying to ignore the plot so as to not get too involved. And now it's devolved into this.

well, i shouldn't be said this.... but this chapter is a disappointing one, ... forced interaction, dull reaction, what else? its just like cheap teenlite serial tv....

I don't care that he is showing her the end of the vault but if he gives her something that is at the end as in the reward or something then I will be disappointed but otherwise I am enjoying it I'm glad he didn't allow her to 'help' him since she wouldn't be any help with the vault although she may be about to help with the sin vault? since he may need someone to tell if he infected?

I may be crazy but this theory doesn't get out of my head once I thought: Is it possible that Ivy is a lesbi#n and she likes Daphne but won't admit it? And for that reason has she been chasing everyone and everyone she surrounds or approaches her? Like all the competitions and disputes with Daphne, to bring to her attention the fact that she only came to "like" Quim after Daphne showed interest in him, not to mention the fact that she should never have existed in HP's original universe ie Ivy and Harry were originally supposed to be one person and now that they are 2 people Ivy's s#xual interest actually and for girls like Harry the idea is completely crazy but I can't stop thinking about the possibilities.

Thanks for the Chapter!👍👍👍👍. At the end of it you are going to decide who is going to be the interest for Quinn, but right now I just prefer you make a new character for Quinn love interest. Because for Dalphene for me is being treated as a side character, and not a potential love interest. And for Ivy she is being treated as a potential love interest, but she is so annoying. Like I don’t know where it started for me when she became annoying but she feels like she is obsessed with Quinn and for me that’s not a good sign. Right now for me she is a creepy person. That’s why I think is better to make a new character or for Quinn to not have a love interest. Anyways thanks for the chapter Author and keep up the Good Work!👍

Really have enjoyed this fanfic so far but it was abot frustrating about the Fact quinn didnt oblivate her because one thing quinn loves and cherishes or his secrets because how is it possible for ivy to know ant the vaults instead of lUna , marcus and eddie who are literally his brother and sisters while as Quinn said he isnt a fan of nosY and annyoing people which exactly decribes ivy at the moment .sorry for ranting love you fanFiction For a really long time but i Just dont understand the last 2 chaPters , thank you and keep up the good work.

First chapter I've ever hated to be honest. So force and changes in personality and thinking. this story was going so good too. Hopefully it doesnt stay on this downward angle.

What's wrong with this tho? Y'all acting like this fic is written specifically for you. Imagine crying over something they didn't like.

Why on earth is he not getting rid of unbridge like he and his grandfather clearly have enough influence in the ministry coupled with all the horrible things umbridge has done is enough to get her removed from the job . If he can’t why not simply kill her (he is clearly strong enough to do so). The story is getting kind of annoying as you are just milking out this arc

vaults are getting boring. characters' personality's are getting ruined. i hope it changes soon. especially this hogwarts year

Is it wrong to strangle a girl in a vault

i don't like him sharing about the vaults

Thanks for the chapter. And another chapter that proves he's first love is still the best, Magic. And another chapter that still cement my beliefs that all the current girls aren't shipping quality.

Quinn x Luna