Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Boring..... I'm the only one who found it boring? the author is making this too long ..... it should end that disease that the only thing it does is weaken the MC and go to the main story quickly .......

i was really love this fanfic ..but last 10 chapters...is just so bad !! maybe your idea was good..but the reality is on paper doesnt working!! im sure you know it too author and i understand ypu can not change it now but when you have a Mc who the readers like Neve but Never change his emotions with no reason

Im sure that next year is gonna be the same thing all over again. since there is no prisoner of azkaban, The author will either make some inner circle of the DE scape just to put the dementors in hogwarts and then he is gonna add another vault with 3000 extra problems because of them. I get when you want to make a story “interesting” or at least no the same in cannon, But that doesn’t mean he has to suffer all years different things, he can have an all right year without people trying to kill him or him making extra problems because of curiosity

I love this stroy, but I hate this arc. The way it was going was great and to me had realistic progression. The Mc had had more than half a decade of extra experience on his peers and good work ethic so of course he's going to be ahead. You also gave him a challenge in the second year which allowed him to improve himself. But the next challenge didn't improve him at all. You pretty much reset the character to a point below when he first reincarnated. Maybe you want to focus on his mental development, but the way your doing it detracts from the story taking what brought people to this story. An slightly op mc in a revamped and upgraded world of Harry Potter. Your taking away what brought your audience, making harder to bring more readers and making it easier for readers to leave. But I have faith all go well. May the force be with you. Oops wrong franchise. 😅

if there are people dropping out, or complaining about a possible nerf or something due the cliff... the authors can only blame themselves for it. I am not even talking about the general theme of the arc, but the use of cliffhangers, especially misleading ones like this one (I hope). I don't really get where authors think that it is a great idea to do that, when it only gets people to make their own assumptions wildly, and divide the chapter payoff between the ones who get excited for the next one, the ones who dropped because of already mentioned reasons (their own speculation for exemple), or the ones that either don't care for the cliff or just gets annoyed (majority). I get leaving a trail so readers get excited for what's to come next but... the way most of the cliffhangers are done (in all novels in general, not only this one) feels like it is something EA or Activision would do (and already did actually...). Cutting part of a already neatly closed/finished content and selling it separated as if it was a bonus or something, instead of being actually something new added. A good way to notice that is if in the next chapter there is a scene break, time skip or anything of the sort early into the chapter, like some paragraphs after it starts... and I gotta say, it feels somewhat disgusting to read those when it happens, exactly because it feels like "cut content" from games.

Haaah... And then instead of properly making it a test like the vault before with clear dangers and benefits here we have a a totally random part obscurial transformation which he can't deal with or haven't even tried himself because why not... Also apparently the idea that you can magically exhaust yourself to make your magic stronger just got retconned...

Are you going to make mc sick or weak potion or make him more a better person in the end like you said because mc can have some pyschal and magical problems and get very weak or mc going to solve his problem before it get to that point???

Yo, forget all this noise. I loved this arc. Everything about it was enjoyable to me. His struggle with the colors, his current state as a consequence and even his difficulties in trying to get cured. I found it beautifully written. And there is so much potential for future writings with how he will interact with characters like Hermione and Ivy because of how he had messed up under the colors.

Dude how long is this arc just tell it so i can come back during the next arc cause this arc is simply too irritating. I wasn't here for some emotional drama. But for a productive mc like in previous arcs.

My guess it's because he believes he is out of control that his magic feels that way as well and so is acting that way... kind of like a placebo effect when you believe the "cure" works it works...

Oh God, first the colors arc, now how long is this going to last. I think I'm done with this story for a while. Year 1 and 2 Quinn the devil magician information broker was awesome, this.... this is a story killer.

Yeah Dropped

I have a theory here... before the incident, he can only use 10%(example) of his magic. But now he can use 100% of it. And its really hard for him to control it. I'm most likely wrong, but who knows.

I NEED MORE I think that if the colors arc continues then a few chapters is enough and if more than 5 until it is resolved/arc ends then it's too much as the arc has taken quite some time now. not to say that i dislike it but this is what i feel now that i reached the newest chapter

Wait... emotions out of control = mood swings. It all leads up to enhanced puberty (enhanced maybe because of the ritual). Nothing is wrong, just an overpowered reincarnate going through a human process that has been amplified.

I'm seeing too much whining here. In any case, do go wild and push out your imaginations, Author.

He's magic is rampaging because he got buffed by the things in the vault? Please don't nerf his magic by that potion. Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Dude this disease is just bad writing at this point because if this were at all realistic he would never go to the next vault because of this so called ‘curse’. i just want some real character development and not this bull. like the last 20 chapters all the development was him being an a*s and the author not telling us why