Comments of chapter undefined of Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

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I think the way the story going, speed wise, is fine no real trouble there. I just hope that the techniques that he may get to help his disciples is something that doesn't break the world you currently building. I don't mind if he gets a strong technique but I would like it if such a technique or something akin to that technique exists and is used by other clans/sects for disciples. So instead of having one all powerful technique have multiple hard to get but still possible to get. Similar how you described the heaven level cultivation techniques. Just my thoughts on this. I don't want this to a complete carbon copy of other disciple/sect system novels. Where the main has a system and immediately has ridiculous powerful support to his disciples. It would be nice for once where the mc actually trains and struggles to teach without be given the answer before hand. Though this is your novel. So do write to where you would like the story to go. Also I am not having any trouble at all with your grammar. Happy writing [img=recommend]

Your grammar is not bad, you rarely make mistakes. And sure, stick to your plan :) Or do whatever you feel would be best^^

I really wanted the MC to grow up with the sect he was with. That a lot of novels don't do. Make the story more humane, with more main character. These characters would give ideas where the MC could not give ... Make the sect grow until it becomes a big sect. Create new laws look for precious herbs, That could help with cultivation. Creating new runes to help plant these herbs by increasing spiritual energy. And instead of giving the system for free to indicate where the techniques are, or the places to improve cultivation, where he can find it. It's just my opinion ... Sorry for saying anything you don't like.

HN1F was good but it had too much word filler paragraphs which I really abhor. At least as far as I've read, your novel doesn't have useless herb finding, tournament,etc. ... .arc. [SO Don't Belittle yourself plz by saying that HN1F is better than yours .] Thx for the chap. 🎵🎵🎧🎵🎵

i enjoy this slower pace, gives time to familiarize with the world, with the characters, and especially gives time for mc to properly grow instead of gaining 20 realms in 2 chapters =)

*Squints suspiciosly* looks at the chapter upload time, looks back at the clock, hmmmmm *strokes neck beard*

What's your mother tongue if you don't mind me asking?

the disciple should tell her master about a possible conflict with another nascent soul cultivator ....

nice chapter

thx

i just thought about power levels in this novel they seem too weak like in other novels a golden core cultivator can smash mountains and fly but here you gotta get to lord domain realm to just fly

I like yours over HN1F. It's not over the top to the point of being riddiculous and the MC isn't restricted in his cultivation, which makes the setting a lot less repetitive (Last fic of this type I read MC could ONLY advance from cultivating disciples, making the plot incredibly predictable...)

Thanks for the chapter, [img=update]

Ty :)

Thanks for the chapter

I am just want eye bloodlines qnd techniques they are really joyful to read.