Gosto de qualquer tipo de novela; principalmente relacionado a recarnação e fanfic.
what hurt the story for me was "Gai" .he already tried to join the ANBU, but the Hokage himself said it wasn't for him. he was already recognized as a strong ninja. ANBU are for sober people.
Maybe because you're leaving so many holes open...?Try reading in past chapters. It might open up new ideas... Try to focus more on the MC's martial arts instead of just cultivation. Try to focus on the kingdom's counterattacks, what they are doing under the plan... What are they doing under the plans. Note: this is a tip related to your lack of creativity... And I'm sorry if I offended you.
Although the main characters appear only in one room.does not mean that there is only Naruto's ... When Naruto failed.And I was on the tree swing looking at the gym. There were several families receiving their children who were approved.
You have knowledge of ancient magic, and that making a serum to increase strength ...? The goddess of death (your sister) would be disappointed.