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lelisPw

lelisPw

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Gosto de qualquer tipo de novela; principalmente relacionado a recarna莽茫o e fanfic.

2019-04-11 JoinedBrazil
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw4mth
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    this chapter washed my soul...馃槫馃槫馃槫

    Ch 89 Little Chat
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    Journey of the Immortal Grandmaster
    Eastern FantasyThis_one_
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw4mth
    Commented

    what hurt the story for me was "Gai" .he already tried to join the ANBU, but the Hokage himself said it wasn't for him. he was already recognized as a strong ninja. ANBU are for sober people.

    Ch 34 Chapter - 34 Miko's Request
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    Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan
    Anime & ComicsAlex_Clive
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw4mth
    Commented

    the queen betrayed zulong ?

    Ch 131 Son of the Dragon
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    Primitive age of Xianxia (Honghuang style xianxia, Pseudo insert)
    Book&LiteratureChristopher_who
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Commented

    honestly, I really enjoyed this chapter.

    Ch 216 The Young Blacksmith
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern FantasyPurpleSpring
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Commented

    please don't make ZARAKI just any weakling.

    Ch 14 Hearty Battle
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    Bleach Swordsman of Kusajishi
    Anime & Comicsnyawdao
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 188 Wooden Box and Demon Ape~
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern FantasyPurpleSpring
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Replied to lelisPw

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 168 Formation Pillar
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern FantasyPurpleSpring
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 168 Formation Pillar
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern FantasyPurpleSpring
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Commented

    Obrigado pelo cap铆tulo

    Ch 162 Secret Realm?
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern FantasyPurpleSpring
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 154 Wang Hu and Wang Lan Arrive!
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern FantasyPurpleSpring
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Commented

    Another tip, try reading bad cultivation novels, it will help you not commit in your story.

    Ch 150 Cure for the Plague?
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern FantasyPurpleSpring
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Commented

    Maybe because you're leaving so many holes open...?Try reading in past chapters. It might open up new ideas... Try to focus more on the MC's martial arts instead of just cultivation. Try to focus on the kingdom's counterattacks, what they are doing under the plan... What are they doing under the plans. Note: this is a tip related to your lack of creativity... And I'm sorry if I offended you.

    Ch 150 Cure for the Plague?
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern FantasyPurpleSpring
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Replied to lelisPw

    Obrigado pelo cap铆tulo.

    Ch 148 Smash and Grab
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern FantasyPurpleSpring
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 148 Smash and Grab
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern FantasyPurpleSpring
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 147 The Double D
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern FantasyPurpleSpring
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw1yr
    Commented

    Obrigado pelo cap铆tulo

    Ch 141 Reaching the Border
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern FantasyPurpleSpring
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw2yr
    Commented

    Although the main characters appear only in one room.does not mean that there is only Naruto's ... When Naruto failed.And I was on the tree swing looking at the gym. There were several families receiving their children who were approved.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5 : Academy Entrance Exam
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    FantasyDevil_Hex
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw2yr
    Replied to Devil_Hex

    It is the first season of Naruto.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 : Academy starts
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    FantasyDevil_Hex
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw2yr
    Replied to Devil_Hex

    Naruto classic. It was bad ... I wrote in Portuguese BR

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 : Academy starts
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    FantasyDevil_Hex
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  • lelisPw
    lelisPw2yr
    Replied to lelisPw

    You have knowledge of ancient magic, and that making a serum to increase strength ...? The goddess of death (your sister) would be disappointed.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    The Tale Of Loki
    MoviesDickMcJones
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