PurpleSpring
Honestly the last few chapters have been pretty stale and unengaging the only reason why I'm even reading the story at this point is that it's in my library and I don't have anything better to do. That's not to say that the first few chapters were engaging but more so that I'm fine with them being mediocre because they clearly showed that the author understood some things he could improve from other books but at some point this story has to be more than a promise of non-retardedness. A goddamn dictionary doesn't have a lot of the problems other books have but that doesn't make them a great read if you're catching my drift.
Hello author, I'm reading your story and I really liked it. But there are some confusing parts. For example, the cultivator’s cultivation level ratings. Sometimes it appears that Core Formation is actually Foundation Establishment, and there are times when Core Formation appears as Core Formation. Well, I don't know if it's a translation error because I'm reading it in Portuguese. If anyone could answer my question I would appreciate it.