Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon's Paradise (HPxMarvelUniverse) [Dropped]

Dropping the novel, you honestly just lost me at him shapeshifting into other people to please them. Yeah no, that just leaves a bad taste in my mouth

The thought of him shapeshifting into other people just because it is their fetish makes it sound way to similar to NTR for my taste, I will continue to read but I will probably drop the moment he transforms into another person to have ***.

Well, what I want to say to the 'ntr' situations is that... The prota doesn't love Jessica and Felicia. How anyway? If Jessica admits that she has a 'fetish' for black males, etc. ...she is just stating the truth instead of hiding it and be dissatisfied for the rest of her near-immortal life. That is a recipe for disaster. If you have a harem full of women with superpowers, you have to make some small sacrifices. I doubt anybody can satisfy powerful females like Enchantress with the same body for 1000+ years. The prota is also one with the harem, and a lot of people wouldn't have minded if Tonk turns into other girls. Anyway, I know that people won't like it, but there is no way that the prota can just collect X females and demand from them to be nothing but loyal, loving 'yes' sayers. Conflict is a part of life, and if Jessica wants the prota to use his future Metamorphmagus powers for some kink, why not? It keeps her satisfied. And the prota won't be an evil dick that is basically enslaving them with a leash. Again, there is no love (at least yet), just pleasure.

Yep I smell ntr shit right there big turn off I'm dropping

i am fine as long as their is no ntr were they have *** behind the back of the mc if they want to leave the relationship then its no problem but if they cheat thats another matter.

I promise you, I don't mean anything malicious by what I'm about to say. I'm just genuinely getting my opinion across. That whole thing from Jessica...It's just weird. You didn't need to add it. Jessica having a bbc fetish is just...odd. Why did you add it? What was the point? Because she's married to Luke Cage in the comics? That hardly matters in a fanfic, man. It was an unnecessary detail that feels like it was added just so you could give the MC a new ability (the transformation one). This whole choice is a very dicey one, honestly. A dicey one you didn't have to add...but I'll give you this: you've got balls, kid. Not many people would add this sort of thing to a fanfic on this specific site. Seriously, you've got some brass ones, mate, and I can respect that. Doesn't mean I'm gonna stick around and watch the MC turn into a different person while he dicks down Jessica Jones though. I'm definitely out because it's a massive turn-off. It's borderline NTR and I'm not about that life, mate. Either way, I wish you luck in future chapters and I hope you continue to write this story. See you around, mate~!

Damn, whats up with the author today, he’s on a roll

Jessica basically admitted she wouldn't do the ritual unless he can change appearance that turns her on

For every criticising comment you have many more encouraging ones too. just keep in mind that you are writing this for yourself

Happy this is not dropped Honestly dude, just write what you want, cant please everyone And if the comments bother you then you can always take a middleground by toning down the smut as many novels often just write about the kissing teasing and cuddling post and pre *** while the event itself would be summed up in one sentence like “they had a long steamy night”

Dude take a break. Don’t pump out chapter as you will get overwhelmed with tge negative reviews and deadline pressure. Take a break come back after a few days and then upload. Think about your novel. I have no problem with it and I really don’t want this to drop. Thanks for the chapter.

he should be able to get Jessica's ability aswell

Ignore the idiots that don't give constructive arguments for the betterment of the fanfic this is one of the greatest harry potter marvel and dc fanfics that i ever read and i will continue to support thus fanfic.

yeah..... him changing to other people leave´s a bad taste ... im going to jump this .. its like he ntr himself lol ... its like having wild sex with your gf while she screams another mans name and thinking about him instead off you ... but this is a step up from that you actually turn into another dude so she can get off ... yeah no thanks byebye

I'm gonna continue reading cause this is a great fic disregarding this whole NTR type shit, but i'll probably just skip the *** scenes where the mc shapeshifts into other people and pretend it never happened.

maybe a good solution than just turning into some random guy with the metamorphmagus ability is to make him how he would look if he was black or any race or color.

I think it’s fine, most god usually shapeshift into one being to another, Mostly because they’re immoral and get bored easily... But please don’t drop.🥺

It’s just most people including me not liking ntr or the act of another person f’ing your girl

good thing i read comments first i am out of here