Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Path to Power
One Piece: Path to Power
Paradox_
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I don't understand how a vice admiral can keep up with a mid-tier yonkou commander. Except for garp, and the rest of the "named" VA's, the rest of them are fodder who would most definitely lose against a yonkou commander. And its not even close. We saw what doffy did to smoker, who is one of the stronger ones. Not to mention, i don't know if i am tripping or not, but damien reached intermediate level for armament haki once before in some previous chapters, only for you to once again show it in the fishman chapters and say he JUST reached it, when i am sure he did it in some previous chapter. The fact that you made aurora ALREADY equal to a quasi-YC is just nuts. I don't remember YC's being cabbages on bargain sale. Not to mention, the mc's power progression is somewhat stale and boring in comparison to the previous original version. The problem is not with the system being taken out, but with the way its paced and written in general. With things as it is, no matter how mich i said the system should be toned down in the original version, the original seems much better. Honestly man, except for some parts that are good, i prefer the original to this version any time of the day. That one was a masterpiece not gonna lie. But you worked hard on this, so gg's man, waiting to see more from you. And a piece of advice, if you haven't already written very far into the story, i would REALLY love it if you went back to the way you wrote previously. This version just makes it seem you are unnaturally focused on taking the sytem away and STILL trying to make it almost the same as the original, which tbh is not working. Both depend of 2 different frameworks.
