Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: New World

Why has this story turned into a summary of the cannon and babysitting Hermione?

Tbh this seems like NC is just writing about Hermione's daily life while being a side character. Almost all the chapters starting from the train till now has been about Hermione and barely any MC.

you need to name this "how I corrected your mother "

I kinda like the idea for this story. But even getting past the reading difficulties brought on by cultural linguistic differences, this story seems both too much and too little. The focus seems to shift too much especially to odd/irrelevant things and the mc seems to be really wishy-washy. Maximilian isn't amazed by the castle because he's from an advanced world with flying cars and many wonders? Why even mention this, let alone specific details of why he isn't impressed? Seems to me author sama is giving our mc here 8th grader syndrome, already thinking so much of himself at 11 that he can't even appreciate the majesty of a magical medieval castle set between a lake with a literal kraken not to mention mermaids and grendilos, and a forest rife with equally monstrous and magical beasts. Not impressed with the half giant, Not impressed with magic. Tell me, is there anything he actually is impressed with instead of just mildly liking it or outright disdaining it like he does the collected magical wisdom of the Wizarding world that escapes him?

author how come he's not first to achieve the transfiguration he already did that in the past, so he should be the first to achieved it

I swear I’ve read that last part of the chapter in another fanfic , word for word basically 🤯

thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter!!

What kind of sick person tries to dictate a 11 years old girls' personality traits which is not your daughter. In earlier chapters a commentor said that "why would MC argues philosophy with a kid as if she is adult" Did you ever give a 11 years old child a long monologue? This is not the reply you can have. And in this chapter, mc tries to shape Hermione's personality. Author seems like grooms Hermione to our MC and gashlight her. Disgusting.

Please I just hope this is just some filler before the actual story starts

how has this so many chapters? this is so freaking boring and the grammar is trash

Yea Hermione

Is the mc still max or

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Thanks

tcx

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks

Nice