Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: New World

Dont really understand the conversation between him and narcissa but oh well

wont lie fucking hate this chapter

Awful interaction with the Malfoys. You’re lucky if they don’t kill you. You know they’d want Draco to inherit the Black estate. Why would they want the competition of an unaffiliated wizard in the line of succession? Why do you think they never tried to get Sirius a trial when Lucius knew Sirius was not a Death Eater?

Why is he so obsessed with narcissa?

so is he just going to leave the Black family for Harry? would be some much better if he took if from Draco

You dont need to be a legilimens to obliviate Narcissa into forgeting about him. And I know that Max has knowledge about the previous world but him spewing things he should have no idea about is kinda counterproductive to keeping the secret of him being reincarnated.

tbh... i hope this isnt a show of what is his character for the series... all i see is a brat asking to be punched...

Why would the MC even care about his 'real' mother? His foster parents spent more than five seconds with him. And wasn't he smart not to take potions from strangers? Where did his IQ go when he insulted a known death eater who is also the head of one of the major houses. Plus, this MC isn't even 12 yet and is acting way out of character when he is suppose to be in disguise.

Cant argue with authors choices. But it is his own imagination. But I cant help but express dissatisfaction from this chapter. their was no need to disclose his identity. And then again, I couldn't understand the conversation b/w MC and Narcissa. This whole chapter is disappointing. But overall I am really curious whats next?!!!!

worst chapter so far

It's not that impressive so far... Nothing amazing happening and everything about the past four chapters just feels underwhelming. There is no big reveal or anything... just plain 'boringness'?

Genuinely terrible.

I'm suffering from mental damage at this point.

I'll add 2-3 more chapters today :3 Average chapters per week: 10. Thanks again for reading, I hope you enjoy it as much as I do.

Okay... My interest on this FF dropped from 7/10 to 2/10.

Really don't understand the point of the chapter Why does he go look for her and what was the meaning of the conversation between them

The author does not have a sense of good names, is the name of his family and himself just a disgusting author from some Asia? Since this (Master) no one will use it sounds very creepy, I also do not understand people who think that they will become attached to strangers already people simply because of the fact that you already had a life, you cannot just take it and to love them or her immediately after reincarnation, I personally would not have any contact with them at all, this is one of those things that I do not like from obviously authors from Asia

i got a question are max and drako the same age or max is older?? are they both 11 years old?